MAYFLOWER SCHOOL OF ENGLISH

Making stories interesting...

Uno de los primeros trabajos del año de los alumnos del nivel pre-intermedio fue el de desarrollar en forma escrita historias con un condimento de dramatismo utilizando elementos dramaticales conocidos y que aporten al relato un interés especial. A través de una introducción dada los alumnos tenían que escribir su propia historia.

                                      Profesora Patricia Tenutta

  At the airport

 She was standing by the check-in desk. She heard her flight number. Suddenly, the man infront of her turned and looked at her turned and looked at her. 'It's you', she said. 'But how do you get here?' The detective woman asked impressed. Her face looked like terrified. When she started to run him, he quickly disappeared. She remembered that in her bag she had a gun and a GPS, so she got them out and rushed again. 'You couldn't escape now' said the FBI detective when she caught him. 'Now you are going to the jail Mr. Tolengo!' 

 Mr.Tolengo was a famous thief who has broken into Elvis Presley's house two years ago. The FBI has looked for him since 2002. Once they caught him, Mr. Tolengo escaped. When the FBI detective looked at him, he had got long hair, miserable clothes, and he was very dirty.

 Finally, when the FBI´s girl was trying to catch him, the director shouted: 'STOP, STOP!! REPEAT THE SCENE AGAIN PLEASE' The film will be fantastic because the director was in all the details.

Ellie Eckley 



At the airport 

I was in my house ready to go to my piano class when my mum Lizy entered like a crazy woman walking towards me, so I said 'Mum,What happen with you? '.At that moment my world turned around. Why? My mum has bought tickets to see my favourite singer in Miami. I was happy and nervous because the concert will be in three days. I had my fanatic t-shirt, my camera and the tickets and I was ready to fly. 
My story hasn't finished yet. Here starts the best part of it. While I was standing by the check-in desk I heard a sweet voice that I had listened before. It was Ethan Smith just in front of me. I said 'What?, Am I dreaming? ' I was trying to keep myself calm but I coudn't believe what was happening. 
Later,to my surprise he turned around and told me ' Annie Black?, OH MY GOD!' I felt all the emotions together...What was happening?.
We sat down because we were both surprised. Ethan,my favourite singer, was talking with me! He told me that he came from Miami because he listened to my group of fans and he was very thankfull for all the things we had done for him. 
Finally, I didn't travel to Miami because Ethan invited me to eat and talk about my job. I will never forget the day that the most beautiful boy in the world travelled 1000 Km to meet me. 

Annie Black